Pages

Tuesday 23 September 2014

Bank Robbery by junior

bank robbery.

Last night on Thursday some guys called Paul pierce, Dwayne wade and Derrick rose robbed the bank.They are best friends and are basketball players.They were dressed up with a black mask with shot guns and a coat.They went on a blue wrx to go to the bank.12 minutes later they were at the bank they were sneaking so no cameras can see them went to the door it was lock”Look up there’s a window open” so They went to climb the window.


Paul pierce went in first diiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnngggggggggggggggg”it the alarm”said Paul pierce.”go and get the money”shouted Derrick rose then they started to get the money”no it’s the police they are coming”Shouted Dwayne wade.They started running with two bags of money”lets go”said Paul pierce.They started to run through the alley way”come lets climb up the ladder”replied Derrick rose.




“yes we have lost them”said Dwayne wade.”Come on lets keep going”said derrick rose.After that they went to go to Paul Pierce is house “come on lets count the money”said Derrick rose.Then they had 2 million dollars”We got a lot of money”replied Dwayne wade.”NO is that the cops”said Paul pierce.”Come let’s go through the window”said Derrick rose.”Get the money too”said Paul pierce.




Then they see one of the cops coming “run its the cops they are coming”said Derrick rose.”we have lost them”replied Paul pierce.5 minutes later they went to robbed the bank again.”lets get some more money”said Dwayne wade.”I think we are going to get $2,000,000 dollars”said Derrick rose.”Let’s go the way we went”said Paul pierce.”No we are BUSTED”said Paul pierce.


1 comment:

  1. I am proud of my story because it is cool and it is all about three basketball players that robbed the bank.The things that I did well is that I have started to put in speech marks in my story.The things that I need to work on in my story is using commas.

    ReplyDelete

Note: only a member of this blog may post a comment.